Xri

As the mist clears, revealing the bleak rocks and dead trees of the valley, Xri the Verpine marksman, requested by Lanin with some technical aptitude lowers his sniper rifle slightly before lining it up to put a target in his sights' crosshairs. Click here to see the WIP blog. Media: Painter Classic

dredwulf60

Looks great, naturally.

Subject-based crit though; He looks awkward handling the rifle. If Verpines are supposed to be such master craftsmen when it comes to ballistic weaponry, I can't understand why they wouldn't develop weapons that suited their own physiology more.

(unless it was a stipulation in the request that he be using a weapon designed for a human of course, then the fault does not rest with you.)

Hisham

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