Alema's WIP
Well Alema, here's what I have so far. Let me know what you want changed. I did use the image you posted for reference, but didn't copy the pose.
Oh yeah, anyone out there, please nitpick my proportions and stuff. For some reason my eye for it is off this week.
*update 1 - slightly different pose, worked on weapon.
*update 2 - oops, forgot her belt and other saber. Is she back to too chunky?
*update 3 - added belt, saber, and slimmed her down a bit.
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Submitted by Xanamiar on Sat, 01/12/2008 - 17:22.
Two things I see...
her left hand ((the one on the right)) is off.. her hand is facing one way, and her arm the other.
And her the knee cap is far to low for as long as the legs are, as far as I can tell....
Then again, I'm not really an artist, but that's the things I see :)
Nice drawing, love the sabers.
Submitted by Alema Dida on Sat, 01/12/2008 - 19:25.
Thank, I like it, just two things. A a lightcesta is like a saberstaff you can look in the internet and there is a picture of one, and I love the drawing, but could you thin her out a bit she looks a little chunky and she has a pretty athletic build from using Ataru. Her uppser body looks great, but it's her legs that that coudl use it. But overall I love it and I LOVE that you took it I've been waiting for so long for someone to take it
Submitted by Wildeye on Sat, 01/12/2008 - 20:37.
Okay, thank you both for the feedback! Doesn't matter if you're not an artist, if something's wrong you'll notice. Alema, I was looking around on the internet and there were 2 different pictures of the gungan cesta, so I was confused. I'm glad you clarified which one you wanted.
Next sketch coming soon!
Submitted by Alema Dida on Sat, 01/12/2008 - 23:13.
One was most likely the altir or whatever. BUT I LOVE THAT PICTURE, IT'S BEAUTIFUL.
Submitted by Wildeye on Sun, 01/13/2008 - 00:00.
The go ahead? So is that the go-ahead for inking and coloring? :)
Submitted by Batty on Sun, 01/13/2008 - 08:31.
I thought your sketch was great!
Submitted by Wildeye on Sun, 01/13/2008 - 09:36.
Thanks, Batty. :)
Submitted by Alema Dida on Sun, 01/13/2008 - 15:47.
Yeah, you can start the coloring. Anything I dpecifically didn't tell you the color of you have free range
Submitted by Alema Dida on Sat, 01/19/2008 - 20:12.
Yeah, just a little sorry
Submitted by Wildeye on Sat, 01/19/2008 - 22:37.
That's okay, I want you to be happy with it. I'll put her on the treadmill. Just kidding! Gimme a couple more days and I will fix her up. :)
Submitted by Alema Dida on Sat, 02/09/2008 - 23:10.
It's great