Devon prelim
Two of three aspects of Devon; I want to get some requester feedback on his face before I go farther! :)
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Two of three aspects of Devon; I want to get some requester feedback on his face before I go farther! :)
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Submitted by Bagman19 on Tue, 08/12/2008 - 22:58.
Awesome. The only note I would make: his young face seems too 'bright'? A bit more snarky, smartass? Love the middle one. Maybe his eyes are too big and open, makes him seem a little spritely. Looks great all around.
Submitted by Xanamiar on Tue, 08/12/2008 - 23:06.
Love the line art man... very nice.
Submitted by Evan Black on Wed, 08/13/2008 - 09:48.
Well, if you're going for snarky, like Bagman19 suggested, it can probably be fixed with something as easy as raising his left eyebrow a little more. The open eyes suggest, to me, an ardent and intense concentration. If that's not what you're going for, and want him to look more angry, then narrow the eyes a little more, as Bagman19 suggested.
Again, these are my own suggestions. They both look very well done, and I look forward to seeing what else you do with them!
Submitted by Wildeye on Sat, 08/16/2008 - 21:56.
Okey doke, thanks for the feedback, youse guys!