Kazik the Jawa Warlord

Asok

Member since: 2007
Location
New Jersey, United States

Kazik, a request for Journeyman of Zion. I hope I've captured the essence of the request. If anything needs attention, let me know.

Comments

JourneymanOfZion

You've really executed the character well, Asok. He looks like a very dynamic figure. The only thing that might be off is that, as far as I can measure, his outstretched arm is about one hand length longer than his other arm. Other than that, you've done a fine job!

JawaStu

UTINNI! :D

Like Zion has already commented, the arms do seem to be a bit too long. Apart from that, this is looking great!

Asok

I actually drew that short arm longer and then shortened it because I thought it was too long! Tell me what you think of the new colored version.

Boshuda

JourneymanOfZion

It looks good. You've done a fine job coloring, Asok, but I'm wondering...could you change his eyes a bit? Make them a little smaller or make them look a little more serious or determined?

Asok

I shortened the outstretched arm. I think it looks much better; thanks for the heads-up! As for the eyes, I'm not sure I can change them. I don't want to compromise his Jawa-ness. If you really want, I can modify them today and post a new WIP tomorrow. Otherwise, I'll post my finished version.

Boshuda

Asok

I've modified the image again, with Drig's advice, and posted the final version. It should be up shortly. I hope you enjoy!

Boshuda