Jedi Crystal WIP

Lal-Khan

Member since: 2007
Location
Austin, TX, USA

Work in progress for Xanamiar.

It's... a very rough WIP at that. This is probably my fourth attempt at a pose and color scheme and I'm still not quite happy with it. Some extra input would be nice.

Comments

Evan Black

Well, for starters I like where you're going with the costume!

As for the pose, she looks like she's toppling over. You might solve that my rotating the image slightly. 'Course, then you'll have to adjust the feet a little as well...

Xanamiar

You might try laces on the boots, instead of buckles...see if you like it better... And her colors are black and white, just so you know.. she doesn't have much color to her otherwise... and thanks again.

Lal-Khan

updated image

I think I finally have this working in the right direction now. I threw in some gray to add some depth to the costume but still maintain the theme.

Let me know what you think of the lightsaber handle. Is this closer to how you imagine it?

Xanamiar

Closer yes.. a bit darker in coloring would be great... I like the direction your going with it...